The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/12
Beautiful job - well written, and packed with enormous truths. Would make a great "Sermon" or "devotional." I enjoyed it. Thank you. God Bless~
I enjoyed this. You did a great job describing the different heroes of the Bible.

Try not to use exclamation points unless it is in dialog. Let your words do the exclaiming for you. Also when quoting the back and forth between Noah and his wife, there should be a new paragraph each time the next person speaks as well as quotation marks for each person's line.

You covered the topic in a fun way while delivering a potent message.

02/21/12
Great message! I especially liked...

“Uhh…honey? I’m going to be kind of busy for about the next 120 years! Doing what? Well, the LORD wants a big boat built. Okay. How big? Umm…about 450 feet long, 75 feet wide, and 45 feet high, give or take a cubit here or there. NOAH! You’re 500 years old"

Good work...