The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/12
Nice job! The ending with the suitcases - was clever. The MC hopefully will amend His ways and accept Jesus Christ - before it is too late. I enjoyed this.
God bless~
02/16/12
Scary story...but fun to read. I can see this as a live play, or a radio show.

Very cleaver story

I hope he missed the appointment with the conductor.
I enjoyed this script. I've read a few entries about having an appointment with death but this was different. Often a dream sequence is viewed as an easy literary tool but I do believe God uses our dreams to give us a message. You did a nice job with this.
I liked the unique way you presented this subject. It is always intriguing when a writer uses the use of : to identify a speaker. I may need to go back and read it again, but the use of the present tense in the last paragraph through me for a moment.