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02/16/12
I sorry for your loss...But, I know He is rejoicing in heaven. This could be a "devotional" and was certainly "on topic." A creative and different way of presenting the theme. Nicely done...and, very true. I loved it. Thank you. God Bless~
You make some really valid points. It is so important to take time to commune with God.

All of the verses in the beginning may be a tad off putting to some. I'd hate to have someone skip over your message because of the verses.

You did a nice job of writing on topic.
02/18/12
Great message.

I liked; "When I went to his office following it, he spoke of the LORD and this was certainly comforting to me"

It certainly is comforting to know our doctors have faith in God.

I also liked "My appointment was lengthy and profitable with my LORD"

Amen! The more time we spend with Him, the more the blessings flow!