The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow this is a powerful story. You took a common scene of astonishment and made it fresh from the POV you used. I could feel the MC's heart pounding as the connection was made. Tiny typo: I think you meant Philippians instead of Philadelphian :)It happens to the best of us but it is a wonderful story.
02/10/12
Well written story. Nice job of bringing the topic to life. God Bless~
02/14/12
Well written! Great story and left me with "much food for thought" about the condition of my own Christian life.."will I be left behind?", "am I lukewarm?"

Felt so very sorry for the boy, but so very common of what happens to our youth.

It grabbed my attention and held it all the way through to the end!

I do pray the Lord gives you many opportunities to share this with many people.

Congratulations for ranking 8th in level one!
04/29/12
Anne, I'm going to feature this story on the Front Page Showcase for the week of May 7. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!