The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful story. Your message is so powerful and one we constantly need to be reminded of.

Small note- ellipses should only be three dots unless it is at the end of a sentence then three dots a space then a period.

You covered the topic in a unique way. The ending is as strong as the beginning. Great writing!
Fantastic job! This story was well written and held my attention throughout.

Nicely done. God Bless~
Beautifully written very captivating article. Indeed the love of Christ is truly astonishing to all those who realize that we were loved when we were yet sinners! Thank you for a great testimony of the love of Jesus Christ!

Sincerely in Christ,

Your writing brought me to a place and I have not personally experienced. Great job
I liked this. Important subject. Well written.
Congratulations! God Bless~
Congratulations for ranking 2nd in level one and 13th overall! (so close to an EC!)