The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/12
WOW! I simply adored this entry. The entire piece was filled with humor, truth, and most important "God."

The struggles "Martha" was facing during the interview was priceless, and had me laughing. Some really great lines and metaphors coursed throughout this brilliant piece.

The converation with God was masterful! This deserves a ribbon! Loved it.

God Bless you~
02/04/12
Some really funny lines in this article and I loved the MC. The ending was not predictable and it made me laugh even louder! Nice job.
02/04/12
Some really funny lines in this article and I loved the MC. The ending was not predictable and it made me laugh even louder! Nice job.
This was great. My favorite lines were the ones about turbo coffee and varicose veins. Nice ending.
This was an interesting story. I giggled about the shoe remarks. It was a little hard at times to follow. You need to smooth out the transitions some. There were a couple of places where you left out a word. I loved the message. Your character was delightful. You did a nice job of writing on topic while creating vivd pictures.
02/07/12
I loved this entry, especially where the MC felt "historic" while begging for an adolescent's help.

So many of us have been in those shoes (but mine were my own and I didn't borrow one from my husband (chuckle, chuckle). You gave me a good laugh and I enjoyed it very much. Good one.

02/09/12
Oh this was so good! Congratulations Mary on your HC placement.

I loved this story- We missed seeing your entries, welcome back.

God Bless you~