The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/12
Oh, I liked this story. Well written, and well told - good message. God Bless~
02/04/12
Courageous MC! A life-sized example of real freedom through and submission to God's Word. Nicely done.
You did a wonderful job of showing how God spoke to your heart and you listened. That's not always easy to do.

My only comment would be not to overuse punctuation like the reflective question marks and exclamation points. Save them for dialog and use words to make your points.

Nice job of writing on topic in a fresh and interesting way.
02/17/12
great peace yes sometimes life can take over and we get tired then is the time to make changes and rest enjoyed reading it