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This was a well written piece, on topic and had a very strong ending. Great job.

God bless~
This is well written and held my attention right through to the end. You have made very valid points, stating the facts - what employment is - and then showing how they apply to our lives as Christians. Thank you for sharing this encouraging reminder with us. Well done.
You made some outstanding points. I really like how you gave real world examples to correlate with the scriptures.

While you covered the topic, you almost overdid it. You used some form of the word employment almost 20 times. There is no rule that says you can't use the topic word, but some of the best stories are ones when the topic word is not mentioned.

I liked how you summed up all if your points at the end. You had a creative take on the topic. It reminded me of the verse, In all things ,give thanks. That's not always easy to do. God has used some of my most trying times to bring glory to his name.
Good points were made! Good writing. God bless!