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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Agreement/Disagreement (01/19/12)

TITLE: Agree and You will be Set Free
By Julie James
01/21/12


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Inside my head this battle rages on,
I don't know if I am right, or wrong.
I disagree with my flesh, it's so hard to control.

I look, and seek trying to find;
The truth that I need, that of a special kind.
The one that agrees with this void inside
It will fill up the emptiness and change the pain.

I found the Truth after reaching the end of me.
Deep in my pain and sorrow you see,
addiction, it filled me to the top of my soul
I agreed with it and it led me to sin

My eyes have been open, by the Truth I have found!
In It I know I am safe and sound.
The Truth I have found, wins the battle you see
The Truth I have found, has set me FREE!
With this I agree.

Do you know of this Truth that I speak
I challenge you to seek
Once you have found It I am sure you will agree.
It will set you FREE!


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CD Swanson 01/26/12
Nicely done. I enjoyed this. God bless~
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 01/26/12
This is a powerful piece. I really liked how you made the rhythm and rhyming seem so easy. Of course, it isn't but you made it look so. You covered the topic in a clever way.
Judy Sauer 01/27/12
Nice work. I especially found your words "after reaching the end of me" so relevant.

Check punctuation; missed question mark in final stanza.

Enjoyed your entry. Keep up the nice work.
Leola Ogle 01/30/12
Great message. The truth indeed sets us free! Thanks for sharing! God bless!
Jody Day 02/01/12
Good message with a beginning, middle,and end. Nicely done.
Juliana Gonzalez02/01/12
Good writing! It feels like there is a wealth of experience and understanding here. I can't wait to see more!