The Official Writing Challenge
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01/26/12
Nicely done. I enjoyed this. God bless~
01/26/12
This is a powerful piece. I really liked how you made the rhythm and rhyming seem so easy. Of course, it isn't but you made it look so. You covered the topic in a clever way.
01/27/12
Nice work. I especially found your words "after reaching the end of me" so relevant.

Check punctuation; missed question mark in final stanza.

Enjoyed your entry. Keep up the nice work.
01/30/12
Great message. The truth indeed sets us free! Thanks for sharing! God bless!
02/01/12
Good message with a beginning, middle,and end. Nicely done.
02/01/12
Good writing! It feels like there is a wealth of experience and understanding here. I can't wait to see more!