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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Embarrassment (01/12/12)

TITLE: A Beginning's End
By Abel Blake
01/19/12


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Nobody else knows
So here it goes...

I met her in school last Monday.
I don't meet people that much.
I'm not called social as such.
Most people leave me in one day.

I don't know what they think;
It's not as if I stink.

She asked me a question. I nodded.
She smiled and she said something more.
She must've thought I'm a bore,
But she kept talking and prodded,

“What's with the blank face?
You look totally spaced!”

We talked through the rest of the class.
We laughed at things that we said.
We were asked to listen instead,
But preferred to draw notes to pass.

We were really connecting
Unless I'm projecting.

I walked to the John my mind cumbered,
By thoughts of her. There I saw,
Her washing her hands. Must withdraw!
But instead calmly asked for her number.

I could've just froze,
So stay on your toes!

*Author's note: the story is fictional


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Ruth Tredway01/19/12
Cute story with a fun twist at the end.
CD Swanson 01/20/12
Cute little story! Funny ending....Nicely told.
God Bless~
Michele Fleming 01/20/12
Very cute story! Bless his heart! LOL Good job and good luck!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 01/22/12
This is quite comical. Some of the rhythm might be just a tad off but your creative take on the topic makes up to it. I believe we all have had a moment of terror of thinking we were in the wrong bathroom. Thankfully, unlike your MC, I just thought I was in the wrong one! Hmm now that I think about it maybe my mind is letting me forget to save face! Nice job
Linda Goergen01/23/12
I like your last lines...we can all make our bad moments better by how we handle them. Good message there. Enjoyed.
diana kay01/25/12
like it :-) It sounds a bit like a rap :-) good going...i am lacking inspiration myself at the moment and this is certainly inspired.
CD Swanson 01/26/12
Congrats! God Bless~