The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/12
Cute story with a fun twist at the end.
01/20/12
Cute little story! Funny ending....Nicely told.
God Bless~
01/20/12
Very cute story! Bless his heart! LOL Good job and good luck!
This is quite comical. Some of the rhythm might be just a tad off but your creative take on the topic makes up to it. I believe we all have had a moment of terror of thinking we were in the wrong bathroom. Thankfully, unlike your MC, I just thought I was in the wrong one! Hmm now that I think about it maybe my mind is letting me forget to save face! Nice job
01/23/12
I like your last lines...we can all make our bad moments better by how we handle them. Good message there. Enjoyed.
01/25/12
like it :-) It sounds a bit like a rap :-) good going...i am lacking inspiration myself at the moment and this is certainly inspired.
01/26/12
Congrats! God Bless~