The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
Having lost a brother to suicide, I found this to be an exact mark. Sometimes it feels that it will never stop raining. And sometimes that is a good thing.
I liked the disconnect of sentences, that it wasn't trying to be poem but rather an expression of emotion.
If this was from the heart of experience, my heart goes out to you.
God bless and keep writing it out.
10/25/05
Very subtle, the switch from a sorrowful rain to a cleansing rain. Done with grace and style. You didn't smack your readers over the head with the answers you found, just blessed us that you found them. Beautifully crafted.
10/28/05
Well done. You took a difficult topic and developed hope from it. thank you!
10/30/05
A lot of class and style in this heavy subject. I like the way it was handled, and the way a transition from one mood to another. Good work.