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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Social Media (12/01/11)

TITLE: I Can’t Believe What Ann Did
By Ken Ebright
12/13/11


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I went out to dinner with my sister, Ann, at a local restaurant. Little did I know the news I was about to hear.

After we ordered, Ann asked me. "Do you remember Doug from your Algebra class from High School? I found him on Placebook.

I raised my eyebrows. "First, what's Placebook?"

Dinner came and Ann put salt on her fried rice. "It's a site where you can meet people and network with them."

"Oh, wow." I smiled as I bit into my chicken.

Ann sipped on a glass of water. "He's now an electrical contractor."

I started on my fried rice, "I don't remember him. Did you ever date him?"

Ann's eyes rolled, "How can't remember Doug? I met him when I was a sophomore and broke up with him a month before we graduated."

I gulped a glass of water, then I had another helping of rice. "I was so busy with band and working part-time that I was never home. I rarely ever saw you."

Ann looked straight out into space, "I should have never left Doug when I was in High School. Gary doesn’t spend time with me. I decided to move in with Doug."

I tried to swallow the news and the rice, but I started to choke. Finally, after a few moments of coughing the waitress whacked me on my back. "How could you break up with Gary after 21 years? What about your kids? Did you consider how this might affect them?"

Ann started to cry, "I…I was bored."

I looked straight into my sister's eyes, "Sis, if you were bored then there were other things you could have done with your time besides going to one of those social websites."

Tears streamed down Ann's face. "Finding Doug gave me satisfaction."

"Satisfaction." I shook my head. "It's sad, that the internet destroyed a 21 year relationship, and now will destroy your relationship with your kids."

Leaving a hot meal on my plate, I got up and walked out. Ann just sat there and cried.


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CD Swanson 12/15/11
Wow - This was powerful,and it was truthful in that life doesn't always have happy outcomes. That was a tough ending but one that leaves your imagination open - praying for the best.
Thanks. God Bless~
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 12/15/11
This is a nice take on the topic. I know of a couple who this actually happened to. The wife was able to work it out and forgive the husband. The ending does feel a bit harsh and I almost wished the brother had been empathitic but life is harsh. I could see someone reading this and changing their own attitude with loved ones in their life. Sometimes stories need to be harsh to help us become better people
Nancy Bucca12/16/11
Man, what a tearjerker. I have heard of relationships destroyed by various social media. You really evoked a lot of emotions with this piece. Good job.
Cynthia Carter12/21/11
I could feel all the emotion. Good job.
Helen Curtis12/22/11
How sad. Facebook and other such sites can definitely bring about temptation and try to lure people away from reality into some sort of fantasy. The grass is definitely not greener on the other side, and we need to guard our hearts and use wisdom when seeking old friends; perhaps 'old flames' are best left unfanned. Well done.
Martha Black12/24/11
Oh, ouch! Knowing someone who did this same thing made this a difficult read. This lady said the guy brought her satisfaction, but the fallout does not allow that to be the truth, especially when you are going against God's word! And, oh, how the kids suffer! What made this an excellent piece, is that the emotion was palatable right to the end. Good job!
Lawrence Hebb 12/25/11
This is a powerful tale. One with a message that I wish i could broadcast on every Social Media website.

I think there is a lot of room for developing the story into the further relationship between the sisters and how they work things out (or don't) but leaving it where you did leaves me wondering 'what happens next?'


   
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