The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/11
This was a well written intensely powerful story. I liked all of the references and the "topic" being utilized in a clever way. Nice job. God Bless~
I enjoyed the jaunt through time. I liked how you showed impact of different eras. I wasn't sure it was going to be on topic but you did bring it in in the end. I wondered if you meant careened instead of careered. This is a nice change of pace. Good job.
I liked this! It kept my attention and made me think. Intelligent and well written.