The Official Writing Challenge
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This is really lovely. You tugged at my heart. So many people will be able to relate to this.

Double-space between paragraphs to give the reader extra white space. Though you mentioned the topic in the end, it felt a little forced. Writing on topic is something that is really difficult to do. A good way to get better is to read the entries in level 3 and 4. Don't hesitate to leave your thoughts. It's a wonderful way to help one another become stronger writers.

Keep writing. God has obviously given you a great talent. You will touch many people with your words. Your passion definitely shines through.
Good writing! I can really identify with this. I was a single mom too and The Lord provided just as the Good Book said. Hang on to your faith; sometimes it takes a while for answers to our prayers but they're coming, sometimes in ways we never asked for.
God is really good. Your testimony just simply touched my heart. I can imagine you while you were telling about your stories and I felt the chill as well, when the guy came as God's answer to your prayer.
Congratulations for ranking 10th in your level!
The highest rankings are posted on the message boards sometime after Thursday evening. It tells up to the top 15 in each level and up to the top 40 overall. If there are fewer entries it may only show the top 6-12 in each level. You did a great job for your first challenge entry. Keep writing!