The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/11
I love this touching story about a child watching dad getting heavenly downloads instead of junk. What a great message, and what a great way to honor one's dad!
This is a sweet take on the topic. The analogy of God's word being like download has been done a lot. Your take on it though seemed very natural and genuine.

Remember to start a new paragraph each time there is a new speaker. Double space between paragraphs to give the reader that important white space.

I loved your message. It felt so genuine. It is really important for parents to be excellent examples for their kids. You did a lovely job conveying that message.