The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a nice story. I liked the questions you posed. I often say we can't think like God because we only have human brains.

You had a part in the middle with quotes around them. I wasn't sure who was speaking and it didn't have a Bible reference.

I like your message. It was clear and one many can relate to.
12/05/11
A very solid and clear message (and needed). I liked the writing and the way you built on previous thoughts to support new ones. This was very thought provoking and left me asking questions ... so it worked!

Nicely done!
12/16/11
Congratulations on your win! God bless you~