The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/11
Wow! That was some story, thank you. It elicited emotions and poignancy shot through me. I enjoyed this sad story that brought hope and Love from GOD at the end. Amazing...nicely done!

God Bless you~
11/17/11
Just beautiful! How often we treat God's messages to us as 'spam' and not for the treasures they are to us. And I loved the email at the end, brought me goosebumps! Well done!
This was full of intensity and suspense. You did a fantastic job of painting a vivid picture in the first few paragraphs.
11/25/11
Loved the story. You must have a problem with your computer, but was able to read it all none the less. Good job of writing
12/01/11
Congratulations and God Bless
12/01/11
Highly commended! Well done Robin!
12/02/11
Beautiful, Robin! Well done!