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This is such a sad story. My heart aches for the MC, the children, and the elephant.

Although it may be a little weak on the topic, I can, in a way see how people might think Spam is innocuous but can inflict damage much like the invisible words can slice through one's heart.

You definitely shared a story that tugged on my heart. Words definitely can be quite damaging. Remember,I can do all things Through Christ who strengthens me. Philippians 4:13
11/26/11
This is a deeply touching story. My heart pounded as I read through.

One of the most profound blessings of writing is the theraputic comfort we receive from pouring our emotions, hurts, and pains onto the page.

In this case, I (the reader) have also been blessed, by being invited into your journey.

11/28/11
This is a crushing testimony. Your truth of it was certified by your honest final line. Not so sure you were loyal to the topic, but may I say this: you express your message well and I’ll be looking for more from you.
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