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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Spam (not the meat) (11/03/11)

TITLE: Culinary Musings
By dee smith
11/05/11


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Culinary Musings
My cooking buddy came over for dinner last night. We started discussing the thing we would hate to cook or eat—spam, came up. My computer buddy wanted to know how one would cook or eat spam. He was discussing the deluge of junk mail, email, text messages, and advertizing we all receive on a daily basis. Where does all this junk mail come from? Why is it sent—don’t they know I probably won’t open it because I don’t recognize the sender? Is there an internet devil who delights in loading my email account with unwanted and unsolicited mail?
Some friends of mine have a unique way of dealing with junk mail. When they get junk mail in the mailbox, they open it, and put the forms in the envelope and send it back—completely blank. This lets the sender know they are not interested, but more importantly the send has to pay postage to get the blank form back. I love the idea. Now, if only there was a way to force the spammers to pay for the spam they send. The problem is the internet is international and not all countries have laws against spam or even want these laws! Some countries, which shall remain nameless, have industries devoted the sending spam. Let’s face it spam is big business which means big money.
Spam wouldn’t be such a big deal, except too many times it has worms or viruses attached. I still don’t understand the thrill of sending someone a virus to disable their computer. What exactly does the sender gain? At least the worms allow the sender the pleasure of getting into your computer and messing it up prior to crashing it. This says a lot about our world and its values. Spammers feel entitled to spam—it’s their free speech. It doesn’t matter who they hurt—there are no absolute rules especially if the rules will infringe upon my freedom to do as I please.
We can ignore spam, but that doesn’t solve anything; in fact it probably will ensure you receive more. We can report spam, but I’ve never found that to be effective either. I believe the only resolution for spam is to teach people respect, compassion and the golden rule. I know this gets awfully close to mixing religion and government – how un-PC of me. But political correctness only encourages others to be narcissistic . (Our culture is so messed up we even named a generation the “ME” generation!) Perhaps it is time to rethink our position on the Bible, to recognize that others do not exist for my benefit. Maybe then spam can refer to the meat—which by the way I also find unappetizing.

This work is fictional, I have no friends.


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Verna Mull11/17/11
I got a real chuckle from your ending! One suggestion. You need to make new paragraphs now and then to break up the writing and make it easier to read.

Hit enter twice when you want to leave a break to make it more readable. Interesting article
CD Swanson 11/17/11
This was totally delightful in such a clever way. I loved it. And, the ending - made me smile...Somehow I know you have many friends. Good job! God Bless~
Randy Foncree11/17/11
This was very informative and humorous...thanks for sharing...I did find it difficult to read in places. you may need to address some of your sentence structures, and break it up into paragraphs to make it more readable. This critique is only given to help you improve your craft. I did enjoy the read...
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 11/19/11
This was an interesting read. I laughed out loud at the last line. Is hope that you have no friends is fiction too)

In the beginning you went from talking about food to computers quite abruptly. To ease the transition, you may want to use humor.

You definitely covered the topic. The title doesn't necessarily fit your story as you only mention food at the beginning and at the end.

You did a nice job of giving the reader something to think about and that's always a good thing.
Wilma Schlegel 11/21/11
This was so informative, and completely enjoyable. I wish I was armed with this knowledge before I wrote my story! Thanks so much.
Lillian Rhoades 11/27/11
With the exception of title, opening and conclusion, your article was on topic. I suggest you stay more focused on the main points to avoid slipping into multiple/nonrelated sub-topics. i.e. From Spam being a big business to a politically correct culture. Doing this impacts on your central point of view/main message. Some extra work needed on sentence structure and grammar. You were a little weak in the "Creative" category, but you did present some unique ways to deal with Spam. Thanks for the suggestions.
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