The Official Writing Challenge
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11/03/11
What I love about this piece is the passion for Christ which bleeds through the honest lovingkindess in the way you speak. This piece is so friendly, and welcomingly informal, the way blogs are intended to be.

Love the bit or irony at the end.
This is really good and thought-provoking. Even though the idea of posting a blog in itself isn't all that unique, I think you were quite creative with the material in the blog.

I wasn't sure how old the MC was. At first,I thought she was a young teen or even pre-teen but then kids 13or 14 don't usually drink coffee.

I think the ending was your strongest part. You made me smile and gave me quite a bit to think about. I can feel your passion in your words.
11/04/11
You never have to apologize for lovingly standing for the truth...I enjoyed this and look forward to reading more of your writings...God bless you...
Very nice way of reminding us to keep our first things first, mainly our time with the Lord. Can't wait to read more of your work. thanks.
I liked your challenge entry by writing a blog. You write very well.
11/08/11
Nice job - you kept on topic, and managed to bring forth an interesting story with meaning. I liked this!
God Bless~
11/10/11
Very nice work here. It felt like I was at your blog and reading your shared thoughts. And the message of keeping Christ first compared to all other things was awesome. Thank you!
11/11/11
Really a thought provoking article. I enjoyed every bit of it.
11/17/11
An excellent description of ponderings everyone should pay attention to in comparing our love for the Lord and for the things of this world. This story is a good reminder of our need to prioritize whatever we do, and to put God first in all things. Great job!
Congratulations for ranking 8th in your level!
11/17/11
Great job Melinda! Congratulations!