The Official Writing Challenge
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This is quite clever. I enjoyed the limerick formatting.

You started one line with the word And, in my opinion, that interrupted the flow a tad. I also may have made a new verse for the last few lines.

I think that your message was great. You did a wonderful job incorporating the topic into your verse.
11/04/11
I enjoyed this...God bless and keep writing...one thing: on the end, I would probably use the word "blessed" instead of blest...
11/04/11
An enjoyable read and a clever use of poetry. Good work ... keep writing!
I enjoyed the rythmn too. How I love that our God will listen to any form of communication, especially written. Just look at all the styles in the Bible. Good job.
This was fun to read. The pace was good at the beginning, but seemed to grow toward the end. Do not forget to proofread for spelling.
11/08/11
Nicely done - and I loved the overall message. Powerful. God Bless~
11/11/11
Great rhyming and a nice overall message. Clever take on the topic. Thanks for sharing.
11/11/11
This was great. I love poetry communication the very best. Bless you for the thoughts contained.