The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this journey through your life. You did a good job of really hitting on the topic. I also thought the beginning and the ending were quite strong.
11/04/11
I really liked the progression of this piece...in how you matured and grew as the years went on...God bless you in your writing...
11/04/11
Your experience is very similiar to mine except I still write in a journal. Good for you! This is well done.
11/04/11
Thank you for your insight on the pilgrim's journey from diary to blog. It was very thought provoking and inspiring.
Very delightful to read. Thank you
11/05/11
I enjoyed reading from the beginning to the end. I liked the way you took us on a journey through life. Great job. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
11/06/11
Very nice. I love the title and the movement throughout the piece and throughout your life. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
11/07/11
Your piece parallels my experience growing up. You were a bit weak on the topic.Your first reference to Blog came towards the end of your piece. Keep writing and reading other submissions to get the feel of how to write more creatively with an attention grabbing opening and closing.
11/08/11
A fabulous and clever entry- topic was spot on.
It held insight and provided moments I could relate to.

Good job- God Bless~
Yep...some people seem born to write and through that exercise seem better able to communicate. I liked this a lot. Good transition from decade to decade leading to the topic 'target'.
11/17/11
Congrats on your HR placing! God Bless~