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10/22/11
Very "up to date" and on topic. A phenomenal entry, well-written, and a dynamic ending. Loved it.

God Bless~
10/22/11
Wow! Wonderful, creative writing. Relevant story. I loved your MC's heart and his intercessory prayer. Your ending shines!
I think you did a great job on the topic. It was very creative. The start was a little weak, if you had led off with the second paragraph it would have grabbed my attention sooner. Some of the sentences were hard to follow. At times, I was a bit confused. Make sure you start a new paragraph each time there is a new speaker. Your message is a great one. It is so relevant in this time of political unrest.
10/26/11
I thought for long while this story was heading toward a comical ending, especially with the Motown angels, etc. LOL I was kind of shocked at the serious turn it took. But, it had a far better ending! Very unique and enjoyable story you wove around the topic! Great job!
10/27/11
You are right. Jesus is the answer.