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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: rain (10/17/05)

TITLE: Drops of Heaven
By Brandi Roberts
10/19/05


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For most people, rain on their vacation would put a damper on their fun. That day, we awoke from pleasant dreams to the sound of rain tiptoeing across the balcony ledge of our room. This was no damper; my husband and I loved the rain, and besides, we'd be spending most of the day inside a bus, as we toured the beautiful land of Israel.

We were staying in Tiberias, at the Sheraton Inn. The aroma of a delicious buffet breakfast tickled the senses as it enticed everyone into the dining hall. We filled our hunger with delicious fruit and vegetables, cheeses and breads, as we sat lazily chatting amongst our little group. Finally, we made our way out to the tour buses to begin the day's ventures.

I heard some people complaining about the rain, while we waited for Yoni, our security guard, to give the go-ahead to leave. How could anyone hate the rain? It brought life.

That day as we traveled all over the Galilean country-side, and into the Golan Heights, we marveled at the beauty that God had bestowed upon the land of Israel. The rolling hills with flocks scattered across them, reminded me of the scripture that tells us that God owns the cattle on all the hills. It was breathtaking. Passing by numerous crops of every kind of fruit, I was also reminded that Jesus had said the desert will flourish. Most certainly it had.

On our way back to our hotel that afternoon, our tour guide, Avi, began to speak about the rain. He told us that in three years, Israel had not had a significant amount of rain, and was actually in the midst of a small drought. However, on that day, he'd seen the more rain come down than he had in all of those three years. He reminded us to look at the sea of Galilee as we entered Tiberias, explaining that through the drought, the waters had receded at least a foot, and the boats sitting at the port no longer had the protection of the black rubber bumpers nailed to the docks. This rain was a much needed blessing.

As we entered Tiberias, the majority of us had our eyes fastened on the sea. It was almost sad, but still very beautiful. The clouds of the day had parted slightly and the sun was peeking through, making Galilee shimmer. Despite what the drought had done, the sea was still a jewel of Israel. I began to hear gasps throughout the bus, and little whispers of "Oh look!" My eyes caught a glimpse of what they were all marveling at. A beautiful rainbow had made it's appearance, and marked the day with joy. Even those who had complained about the rain earlier in the day, couldn't hate it any longer.

For most people, rain on their vacation would put a damper on their fun, but for us, it was an added bonus to an already awesome trip. I went to sleep that night thanking God for blessing us so greatly that day with little drops of heaven.

Thou, O God, didst send a plentiful rain, whereby thou didst confirm thine inheritance, when it was weary. (Psalm 68:9 KJV)



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Debbie Sickler10/25/05
This is was an interesting entry. You reminded me of a vacation full of rain I could have written about. Oh well, to late now. :) Good job and nice descriptions!
Amy Michelle Wiley 10/27/05
That was great! " the sound of rain tiptoeing across the balcony ledge of our room"--I love it! Good job!
Linda Watson Owen10/27/05
I feel like I've just taken a trip to Israel with the added blessing of rain...bows. Wonderful entry!
Laurie Glass10/27/05
You conveyed your story nicely. Thanks for sharing.
Pat Guy 10/27/05
I really enjoyed reading this! You took me to a place I would love to visit and interweaved God throughout so effortlessly. Good job and well done.
Julianne Jones10/27/05
Beautifully done. You transported me there - I felt that all I had to do was raise my eyes from my computer and I would be able to see the sights. Can't decide what line I like best. Is it "the sound of rain tiptoeing across the balcony ledge" or "the sea was still a jewel of Israel"? Hope you share more writings about your travels. Well done.
terri tiffany10/28/05
You painted a beautiful picture of the land and what you saw! I was intrigued to read about their lack of rain. The rainbow made for a nice ending!
Jeffrey Snell10/28/05
Great story! I've long wanted to travel to Israel and still hope to someday with my family. Thanks for describing its appearance and your spiritual senses so vividly.
Garnet Miller 10/28/05
Sounds like somewhere I'd like to visit. It seems that the people of the land were thankful for the rain as well. Thanks for sharing this well written piece:)
Cassie Memmer10/28/05
Thank you for the trip! Nice ending even for those whose 'glass was half empty.' Good job!
dub W10/29/05
Good description, and a nice recounting of your trip.
Shari Armstrong 10/31/05
YEAH!!! Wonderful!!! : ) Way to go :)
Joseph Civitella10/31/05
Very well done, Brandi. Congratulations on your first place finish! As usual, when I read your entries, they end too soon... and so I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
Nina Phillips10/31/05
Congratulations Brandi, Lovely descriptions of your trip to Israel. Nicely done!!! God bless ya, littlelight
Debbie OConnor10/31/05
Great descriptions and a wonderful illustration of the fact that our inconvenience may be another's blessing. After a long draught God relieved Israel's great need on your vacation--glad you didn't mind! :) Congratulations!
Deborah Porter 11/01/05
Brandi, congratulations on your great win! Time to move up to Level 2, if you haven't already.

You also ranked 25th out of 147 entries, which is excellent for a Level 1 entry. Well done! Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Tammy Johnson11/01/05
Wonderful! So excited for you, dear! Way to go! Be encouraged and keep writing!!!!
Shelley Snyder11/01/05
Congratulations!!
B Brenton11/02/05
It was beautiful. You did a wonderful work here. You spoke the truth, made it easy to read and added a lift in my heart.
Love and blessings are coming your way! - praise Jesus!
I love it. Thank you and Congrats, you beautiful girl!
Carol Shaffron04/08/06
You wrote so beautifully it was as if I were there along with you. Thank you for a lovely "trip" to Israel!
Carol


   
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