The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/11
Very, very, moving and beautiful. Helps me quite a lot because it supports my un-decision.
I enjoyed this. It is on topic and flows very nicely. Good starting and ending. I love how you demonstrate the balance between faith and works, searching computer style and searching faith style. Good jo!
10/22/11
I felt this was an ingenious entry. Nicely done bringing forth the topic in a powerful way. Nice reference with "scriptures" and balance to support your message.

Great job- God Bless~
This was lovely and had agreat message. Though you included the topic it felt likeyou added those verses just so itwould be on topic. You do agreat job with the rhymes. I've never seen verses added into poems like this. Keep writing.
10/25/11
Very nice poem, with meaningful message about faith woven around the topic! I enjoyed the read! Fine job! Blessings!
Nice poetic flow, Interesting sequence in the rhymes.
10/25/11
The limerick structure fits your message very well. This rolls off the tongue.