The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/11
Very on topic, good job. Add a scripture and you have an awesome testimony/devotional.
10/21/11
I enjoyed this beautiful message, well written and your heart was totally in this entry. Good job. And, Jesus is our everything.

I mentioned in a couple of other entries, "I love imaginative pieces" that do not go with the typical definition of the topic at hand. Keep writing. God Bless~
10/22/11
I love reading anything about the Holy Spirit. And this devotional was DEFINITELY no exception.

Thank you for reminding us of the work that He does in our hearts and in our lives.

I truly enjoyed reading this. Nicely done!
10/23/11
Lovely little devotional--reminds me of something I would read in "Our Daily Bread". Strong all around.
10/25/11
So true. Previewing will help you find those little typos (as I am learning in my submissions) You are referring to a level of the Spirit that not everyone can identify with, but I can appreciate. You had plenty of words left to include a personal experience that could help others who don't yet understand the work of the Holy Spirit as you do.
10/26/11
This is a nice, short, right to the point devotion. Try to write on topic without using the topic words. You usedthe word search engine 5 or 6 times in just a couple of paragraphs.I liked that your shared snippets of your life and personal thoughts to illustrate your message.
10/29/11
Thanks for your devotional. Yes, this a metaphor of an Holy Spirit touched conscience searching our inner being. Great job!
11/01/11
Short, sweet little devotional - says so much and says it well, in so few words! Good job!
11/04/11
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level one!