The Official Writing Challenge
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09/22/11
Well said.
This message is spectacular and it really touched my heart.

I'm not the best one to give advice on poetry as I really struggle with flow and rhythm, but some verses seemed to flow easier than others. The last stanza is beautiful, but I stuttered just a tad while reading it. Just tweaking it a little would make it easier to read. Try something like this:
Friends are also like diamonds Some are fake and some are real

Overall, I think you did a fantastic job. The message is beautiful and I could really feel your emotions jump off of the page.
09/26/11
Poem of beautiful sentiment and truth.
09/28/11
You made me think of my best friend! She is a gift from God! So you did a great job describing a real friend!!!!