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Oh my, such a beautiful story, animal lovers will be teary eyed, I am.

A few extra paragraph breaks would be helpful, but I really loved this. Thank you!

P.S. I wonder what the story would look like if you told it through Ceasar's eyes? Just a suggestion, I wrote one about my dog over a year ago (it's in my archives, "A Dog Year"), and it brought me tremendous joy.
A very touching story...
it is a very lovely moving story.Thanks for sharing.
I have tears in my eyes. Where would we be, who would we be without our pets? This was a very touching story. Thank you for sharing.
This is really sweet. Pets can definitely make a difference in one's life. I bought a puppy that I am training to become a therapy dog. When he is older, I hope to take him to nursing homes and hospitals.

Remember when you use Mom and Dad as a substitute for a name to capitalize it. If you put my or the in front of it then it's lowercase.

This was a well-written, beautiful testimony. It brought tears to my eyes and motivated even more to keep training my puppy to become a therapy dog.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story beginning to end. It was so sad, yet so wonderful too in the love, caring and sharing between neighbors, family and most especially Caesar, the dog. I definitely think dogs are some of God’s earth angels, they love so unconditionally! You should submit this to a dog magazine, for it is so touching! Great job!