The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
This poem is awesome on many levels--great rhyme, great meter, great message--but I especially have to commend you for rhyming "mayhem" with "a.m." Bravo!
Wonderful and refreshing Poetry. Keep up the Good work. Thanks for sharing.
I really enjoyed this poem. One little mix up at the beginning - to for two, but no biggie. Great job!
10/26/05
wow your a beginner.. Great poem thanks for sharing
10/27/05
I agree, bravo!!! Good rhythem, and meter and poem altogether. However one thing, too many "...'s" which I think were not warrented. Nice work!
God bless ya, littlelight
10/29/05
"two" - can't believe this poem is in beginners. Nice job.
That was great!! I loved the rythmn and message!
Very cute! I enjoyed this!
01/15/06
Congratulations on your Third Place Win. Awesome! And to think you write poetry too! Well done, and a great job of saying to God "How Great Thou Art"...I keep wondering how a Marine, ANY Marine, can write such sensitive stuff...Kudos, my friend, Kudos!!