The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful poem with a lot of heart in it.

I don't think you needed the first sentence or the last paragraph.

Your words are so lovely and powerful, they stand on their own strength.
09/27/11
I love this truth you stated: "Someone you and I have in common though He is not common. Amen to that! This poem was a good read. God Bless!

I felt the passion of your words beginning with the second stanza and building to the next to the last. Then it kind of seemed to fizzle at the end. I agree that this would have been a stronger poem without the first and last stanzas. The middle is terrific!
Congratulations for placing 7th in level one!