The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/11
Nice job! I enjoyed this good clean read. God Bless~
09/17/11
This is a creative story. Well done! Keep writing!
God Bless
This was an interesting and educational read. I enjoyed it.
09/18/11
Great ceativity ad flow. If it wasnt for the entry "Gone" Id say you would be moving on. Keep up the good work.
09/23/11
This story is good, Ebony.

I appreciate that you made the point 'a thought becomes a desire, and then a rebellion'. That's Sin - no matter which course it takes.

Keep up the good work.