The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/11
Some good messages peppered throughout, and a nice job overall.

The only thing, I would suggest is breaking up the paragraphs. But, having been there myself one time, it may have been an accident, so if that is the case...Ignore me! LOL.

But, good job. God Bless~
09/17/11
You have written a powerful and very true message here for the reader.
Great job! Keep writing!
God Bless
This is a nice devotion with great scriptures to back up your points. Double space between paragraphs to give reader that white space.

You did a nice twist on the topic but may have missed the main point of the topic. On the message boards under the heading Writing Challenge there is a thread that tells the different things the judges are looking for in the challenge.

Overall, you presented a well-written piece that has a lovely message. Keep writing and don't get discouraged, you have a lot of potential and I think you will become a very talented author,
12/08/11
Very well done.