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10/24/05
This is a very well-thought-out study of some important issues.

I'd start a new paragraph at "What are the areas of your life..." in paragraph four.

Your bullet points about danger signs for a teenager, or for a marriage correspond well with their "final phases." But I'm a little less sure that the connection between depression, sexual activity, and use of antidepressants is valid.

The ending--the focus on God's mercy--is strong and hopeful.
10/27/05
I thought this was a very nice thought and devotional presented here. Really helpful advice and warning signs. Nice work! God bless ya, littlelight
10/29/05
You said it in the first paragraph - this is a study; inthat was the purpose, you did a good job.