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This story is packed with excitement. It held my attention to the end. Great job!
Gripping, disturbing and very real. I hope the person(s) in that "humble house" tell her she is the daughter of the King! Her body, her temple, is above the marriage vow in this case.
A beautiful, well told and highly relevant story. Blessings.
Your story was so compelling and suspenseful. It speaks to so many women in this same predicament.
This story was so real it made me cringe. Having seen and heard stories of battered women it brought those situtions to my mind.

Compelling, and powerful. God Bless you~
Oh what a sad story. I could feel her pain and cringed at his anger.

Tiny editing note - the word okay should be written out or both letters capitalized.

The saddest thing about your story is that it is true for far too many people. You did a great job writing about a difficult topic.
Well done. I think Domestic Violence is such a hidden away evil. I thought you handled the subject well. You told us just enough detail and maintained the pace of the story. Thank you.