The Official Writing Challenge
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09/15/11
Interesting take on the topic. Never thought of it from that perspective before.
09/16/11
Good piece, nice entry. I always like the interesting stories that come to the writer's mind pertaining to biblical passages.

God Bless~
This is very creative. I liked how you took a true story from the Bible and put your own imaginative touch on things we don't know.

You did have a few typos, for example loose should be lose (sorry didn't catch that at first), your should be yours and you are missing a comma or two.

But it was a clever idea and created a picture in my mind. The only other suggestion I might give you is don't be afraid to use all 750 words. You could turn a good story into a great one with more details. Keep writing, you're doing a great job and are getting better and better.