The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/11
Good job. As I have said many other times in various entries, I love stories based on biblical passages and characters. Good job. God Bless~
09/10/11
Drama, Dialog and Doctrine...
Good job!
You brought this to life and made it feel like Iwas right there. Great writing!
Your story switched tenses a few times, and I'd like to see you relax your dialogue a little more. This is a nice retelling of this great story.
Well written biblical fiction...nicely done.
09/14/11
Very nice biblical dramatization! Enjoyed the read!
Good job! Keep writing! There is natural talent here. I have no doubt you will continue to grow as you continue to write.
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level 1!