The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/11
Very nice job with a vibrant message of hope and love. I enjoyed it, God Bless~
09/10/11
Your use of opposite styles in proclaiming God's word were developed well. Pastors need to balance the message. God is both a God of love and a God of wrath. He loves the sinner and hates the sin!
Great message! I could really relate to the girl. You had a mistake or two with quotation rules. But I loved the story of the girl and it really touched me. I wish she had a name so I could feel like I really knew her. I have the feeling this is a true story too. Nice job.
A great message. Watch your tenses.