The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/11
I liked this story very much. Good job. God Bless~
09/09/11
You've done a nice job painting the scene and scenery for the reader.
09/10/11
This is very good. I could feel James persuading Sarah and turning her heart toward his dream. It made me want you to go on, to tell the story of their trip west and their homesteading.

Thank you for the adventure.
This is a charming story. It feels just like a tale from a Little House episode. You did a nice fresh approach on the topic too.
09/12/11
Love is a powerful agent of persuasion! I perceive this may be a winner!