The Official Writing Challenge
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10/27/05
Mindy - this is over cited - simply meaning that the citations dominate the true theme, which I found beneath the clutter. I think you have a wonderful message here; just loose the second person voice and tell the story from your heart. Blessings - dub
10/27/05
It's underlying truth beneath the boundaries of theology--Christ Jesus lives in our hearts and lives. Very nice work--although I really like to read through to find your personal relationship and experience shining through. God bless ya, littlelight