The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/11
That was packed with emotional drama it was simply powerful! Nice job, and a beautiful ending. The Lord can accomplish anything, if you are willing to listen and follow Him. God Bless~
09/08/11
That was packed with emotional drama it was simply powerful! Nice job, and a beautiful ending. The Lord can accomplish anything, if you are willing to listen and follow Him. God Bless~
09/13/11
I like the way the story developed as you continued to unveil your main character. We saw both his hard exterior and his heart of flesh. I loved the comment about the milky smell of the baby! Nice work!
This was full of suspense. You held my attention from the very beginning. I could feel my heart beat a little faster.

I may tend to think havinga mysterious angel save the troubled man is a bit too cliche' but you did a great job with it. So even though I suspected an angel would intervene you wrote they passage so it was still a delight to read. Nicely done.
Congratulations for ranking 11th in level 1!