The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/11
Beautifully written. I loved this. Nice job! God Bless~
09/13/11
Interesting story and I could feel the anxiety of your main character.
This is a sweet story. I liked the ending a lot.
09/14/11
Oh I enjoyed this! It was so well written and I love how the seed was planted in Robert and the kind and Godly watering his boss had planned! Great job!
09/14/11
I really like this. It can be so very hard to wait for a man/woman who loves God, and many a time I was tempted to do just that. How very blessed I am now, happily married for 8 years to a wonderful, Christian man! Well done on a lovely entry.
Well written with a powerful reminder to not be "unequally yoked" and wait on God's timing!
Good job!
Good job. Tightly written with great dialogue and a good message. As you've written this, it is a very believable story line.