The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/11
This is an all too common theme in life, inability to forgive as Jesus wants us to. Good job. God Bless~
09/09/11
Makes you wonder how many bible studies a Christian must go to in order to get it, forgiveness! Good story!
This is A great story and I liked the ending. Often writers try to force a happy ending but yours feels real. You have an extra unneeded as in the end but your did A great job showing rather than telling Great writing.
09/14/11
Ken is using firm yet gentle persuasion. I hope it works!