The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/11
I enjoyed this poem which held significance to the topic and life overall. Good job. God Bless~
09/09/11
This a beautiful poem. As I was reading it, my heart seemed to be filled with your words. Thank you for sharing...
This is really lovely, It's voice reminds me of some poems I've written. It's nice to know others understand and Outstanding to know God understand even more.

Small editing note: summers' day should be summer's day.

All in all you did a nice job with this heartfelt plea.
09/14/11
You have led us in worship!
09/14/11
This poem touched my sometimes fearful heart. This is a beautifully written tool that I would be pleased to use in my personal evangelism. It speaks softly and directly to the soul.
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