The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/11
I enjoyed this poem which held significance to the topic and life overall. Good job. God Bless~
09/09/11
This a beautiful poem. As I was reading it, my heart seemed to be filled with your words. Thank you for sharing...
09/13/11
This is really lovely, It's voice reminds me of some poems I've written. It's nice to know others understand and Outstanding to know God understand even more.

Small editing note: summers' day should be summer's day.

All in all you did a nice job with this heartfelt plea.
09/14/11
You have led us in worship!
09/14/11
This poem touched my sometimes fearful heart. This is a beautifully written tool that I would be pleased to use in my personal evangelism. It speaks softly and directly to the soul.
09/15/11
Congratulations for ranking 8th in level 1!