The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/11
I love stories based on biblical passages. Nice job. God Bless
09/11/11
This is so very true, it's not the end at all! Well done!
You're right. It's not the end but just the beginning. Try using more descriptions Show us how Mary must have looked when she found the tomb empty, I picture her mouth dropping open, hands flying to rub hereyes, shaking her head. I can tell you really want to spread the great news of Jesus andyou have a lot of passion. Many writers struggle with telling a story VS. showing the reader what might have happened. Keep writing! God bless.