The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story! You did an excellent job showing me what happened. I know so well that falling for the wrong person can make life so much worse than a broken heart. Nicely done.
09/02/11
What a neat story! I could feel Annette's heartbreak as you told her story. But I loved how she made the choice in the end to go forward with hope. I know God is going to bring her the right man in His time!

Good job!
09/03/11
Nicely done, I really liked this. An important message as so many people never realize the most important (and reliable) relationship is with Christ. Paul wrote : "For it is better to stay single as I am..." for a reason.
09/03/11
Great message! I loved this story. Good job. God Bless you~
09/05/11
Very sweet story...I like this line especially..."its molten gold stripes warming her face."
09/08/11
Congrats on your win! Really terrific!
09/08/11
CONGRATULATIONS EBONY!!! Yay!

This was a great story. I could feel Annette's pain and I know a lot of single Christians experience this. After I was married, my best friend remained single for several years and had to constantly give it to God and trust Him. In His perfect timing, God gave her a wonderful husband.

You painted a good picture with your words.

Congrats again. :)

09/08/11
Congratulations! God Bless you ~
09/13/11
Great story and so crediblly told. I love your word pictures - nice poetic touch. And to place with your first entry is no mean feet. You're on your way to Masters level. God bless.
09/21/11
Ebony, you did a wonderful job of showing the effort it takes to come out of the hopelessness of depression. Not an easy feat in 750 words.

Your reference to Vivaldi's "Summer" is so appropriate. If that piece doesn't get the blahs out, what would?

Third place? No. NO! You deserved first place for this story.

Keep up the good writing.