The Official Writing Challenge
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This has a lot of wisdom in it and I can tell you have a great deal of passion. We as humans aren't perfect but it's wonderful that Jesus died for our sins. There is hope for tomorrow.
09/02/11
You painted a very vivid picture for your reader. I could really feel your anguish over the supposed decision of the caller. I pray that she chose life for her child. God bless you in your work as you fight for Life!

Keep writing!
09/03/11
Powerful- all kinds of emotions being written in this story. I pray the ending was "the Godly one." I liked it, God Bless~
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