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This is beautiful and quite timely. I can't imagine what it would be like to live through that experience with strangers in a foreign country.

I had a little problem at first seeing how this fit the topic but after pondering it, I'msure at wasn't had you expected your French vacation would turn out.

This is a touching story that almost everyone can relate to in their own way.
09/02/11
You "hooked" me with your first sentence! Your story was told very, very well and I enjoyed reading it very much.

Great job!
09/03/11
Very nice! I enjoyed the entire story and the loving message it told. God Bless~
09/03/11
I enjoyed your story. I like how it contrasted the personal danger in Paris with the larger danger happening in the U.S. Very well done.