The Official Writing Challenge
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09/01/11
This is interesting and flows nicely. Although at times I felt confused I believed the was was his life and he not his wife when his luck changed. The ending took me by surprised as I suspect many are when a loved one status them in the back. Editing note in vein should be in vain. You did a lovely job with this complex poem. I think depending on the reader, it'll be taken in different ways. That's hard to do.
09/02/11
That is one of my favorite features of the marriage between words and a reader. Much like the written Word, depending on the individual and life at that time ... it can grab you in a number of ways. Thank you for your critique.
09/03/11
Interesting twists, here and there. I enjoyed this unusual story. Nice job. God Bless~