The Official Writing Challenge
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This is' a great testimony of faith and what God can do in your life. I'm glad you weren't discouraged by that first Bible study.

You do have several errors in this piece and places where you left out a word or two. Proofreading is so important. If you don't have someone to proof your work for you, try leaving it for a day or so, then read it aloud. Also double space between paragraphs to give the reader that all important white space.

I have no doubt that God has great plans for you! I can feel your passion. Keep writing for only you can tell the stories God gives you. You did a great job glorifying God in this and it was a pleasure to read.

What a powerful testimony! I very much enjoyed reading this.

Leaving some "white space" between your paragraphs and separating your words in quotations (the dialogue lines) will make it easier for your reader to follow your words. And trust me, they're going to want to! God has given you a message and it's wonderful that you are sharing it through the written word. Keep it up!
Powerfully packed with emotions throughout! I loved it, and the intense feelings of the writer, and the MC. I loved it. Nice job! God Bless you~
Thanks y'all for your comments. I really do appreciate the feedback. I will certainly take any lessons I can get. :)