The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story about faith and how God helps us through tough times.

When the MC turns to the Bible actually give the name of the book, chapter and verse that he is turning to. This will be a good way to show reference. Also when you quote a song make sure you have a footnote with the name and author.

I really liked your Characters; they felt so real. This is a message that so many people can relate to today. Nicely done.
09/02/11
Nice story - I really like the infusion of hope that you wove throughout it. I also loved the reference to one of my favorite hymns, "The Solid Rock."

Nicely done!
09/03/11
Right on target with todays climate, and with this weeks topic. I really enjoyed it. God Bless~